Jack and Tom

Go look at this video on YouTube... It's really sad

Hiding in fear

I can not move. 

All I can hear are the birds but, I'm not convinced they're far away now. Now I can start to feel my adrenaline pumping... I feel the blood prowling round my body. I feel the cold breathing heavily through my coat. I can feel the frost trying to cut my circulation off in my hands. The frost is trying to sneak between my boots. I can hear a bit of whitenoise.

I can hear them muttering… I can hear them approaching me... I stay dumb and remain in Suffocated silence.  Then I see in the very edge of my eye, them slowly disappear in the glare of whiteness… 

MY POEM

MY POEM

I can not move.

 I'm not convinced they're far away now. Now I can feel my adrenaline pumping... I feel the blood racing round my body. I feel the cold breathing heavily through my coat. I can feel the frost trying to cut my circulation off in my hands. 

I can hear them muttering… I can hear them approaching me... I stay dumb and remain in Suffocated silence.  Then I see in the very edge of my eye, them slowly disappear in the glare of whiteness… 

No finished, what do you think so far

Before and after

This is my cubism art work. Before and after. What do you think.