My work

Story

We're at the skatepark. I have a vanilla cola for a treat. The skatepark is in Okato. I'm heading up to the ramp about to do one of my best tricks, it's called a tail whip… I land the trick but I look back and there was Barnie crashing… My brother landed right near my other brother…… in seconds he was back up again… But his ankle was very sore...

There is one lie... Try to guess it

Look at the video of the crash

Jack and Tom

Go look at this video on YouTube... It's really sad

Hiding in fear

I can not move. 

All I can hear are the birds but, I'm not convinced they're far away now. Now I can start to feel my adrenaline pumping... I feel the blood prowling round my body. I feel the cold breathing heavily through my coat. I can feel the frost trying to cut my circulation off in my hands. The frost is trying to sneak between my boots. I can hear a bit of whitenoise.

I can hear them muttering… I can hear them approaching me... I stay dumb and remain in Suffocated silence.  Then I see in the very edge of my eye, them slowly disappear in the glare of whiteness… 

MY POEM

MY POEM

I can not move.

 I'm not convinced they're far away now. Now I can feel my adrenaline pumping... I feel the blood racing round my body. I feel the cold breathing heavily through my coat. I can feel the frost trying to cut my circulation off in my hands. 

I can hear them muttering… I can hear them approaching me... I stay dumb and remain in Suffocated silence.  Then I see in the very edge of my eye, them slowly disappear in the glare of whiteness… 

No finished, what do you think so far

Before and after

This is my cubism art work. Before and after. What do you think. 

Camp

CAMP SWIM

At Vertical Horizon camp there was a river. Room 9 from frankley school swum in it.

There was a water slide into the river and a deck to jump into the water. I didn't want to jump in at once but I did end up doing it. I did a front flip into the water. The water was 3 meters deep. I could not touch the ground. I did bombs into the water side by side with my friends. We went In kayaks round the river as well. We went in donates round the river. I had a great time in the river.