Sunday 7 June 2015

The war

THE WAR

Lifeless trees, muggy skies. 
Bridge staying stiff with fear.
Bubbles of mud. 
Wind flying into the soldiers’ faces, 
making their eyes water. 
Pot holes filled with blood. 
Soldiers boots walking with nervousness.

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2 comments:

  1. Leith9 June 2015 at 00:27

    Nice work Deno, nice use of words!

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  2. Anonymous10 June 2015 at 19:03

    Lachlan's favourite part is 'bridge staying stiff with fear'.
    Mrs Cribb likes ' soldiers boots walking with nervousness'. This is really effective personification.

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