My mask

I made a scary Jason horror type mask. It yellow with bloodline leading into the mouth like a vampire and blood splats. Bloody lips like its been eating someone.

UPGRADE OF REFLECT OF WRITTING

My writing is based on WW2. I have done a series of them. The mission one to the Mission five and doing the mission six. They are four pages long to six or seven.

My goal is organization. I need to work on sub titles and paragraphs. sometimes I put two ideas into one paragraph but I am getting it. When I do a information report, I sometimes forget and don’t do sub titles correctly. I am working on this.  

I got inspired to do a war story was because of war movies I was watching and I thought I could put some good language in there and It would be a powerful. That lead to a big series of stories.

The series is about dogfights and war missions. The mission one is two hook up with bombers and lead them to a oil company in germany. We come across 109’s and german jets. I fly in the mission a P 51D Mustang. I have a friend called Sam in the story. He died though.

Then the second mission ( The Mission Two ) is about me getting deported to Britain to fight due to loss of military and I then fly a Spitfire. I get shot and ditch. I had a friend in this story as well called Larry and he was my mate in the Mission there as well but died due to the mission in the Mission Three.

The mission three was about how I had never flew a bomber and we were on a bombing mission. We get shot down by a formation of enemy fighters in Japan off the border by a few KM. Larry died and I had to leave him. Then I run from the waves of Japs in coming burn’t and injured and in minutes dieing.

Then It goes to the mission four, the escape from hell. It’s about escaping the Japs by running and dragging myself to the Britain Border before death and captured by the Japs. A chopper pilot gets me but we get shot down then it's back to square run as I parachuted out. Then another pilot comes in a chopper and we make it back to the base. Then I rest up at the base mini hospital.

The mission five is about the base where I am resting getting bombed. A bomb that hasn’t gone off fall through the roof. I run outside and get a random Spitfire. I am now not injured or sore, I am just a bit tired. I shot down some planes and can’t land at the base due to explosions and my fuel tank just holds up for traveling to a new base.

The mission six is going to be about  dogfights in the American planes which will lead to the mission nine. It will have some facts to...

Here is some of my writing… ( No paragraphs )

My lack of my wing man leaves me exposed, I look in my revision mirror to see a big splash of metal. It's a 109 on my Six o'clock. This unlike any pilot I have come across. I roll, reverse but this pilot has sunk his teeth into my Mustang. I look in the mirror again and realize that this guy is out performing me. I took a hard turn right and he out turned me and got his guns on me and got me. My aircraft is now slightly Injured, but far from broken. Only another big hit will have an effect on me. My gas mask at 4 G is meant to stay on but I needed to keep pushing it up because I was sweating, and it’s falling down my chin. I want to get airspeed and turn sharp but he has enough time behind me to react. I perform a make shift dare devil trick that I have only practised a handful of times. My head hits the canopy as I pull the controller hard in my gut and turn hard rudder which stalls the aircraft and the talk of the propeller helps twist the plane around and then you just neutralize it. This was a crazy move because if I failed, I would have become an easy target for the dirty german. My airspeed was down to nothing and I fall for 200 feet in 5 seconds until my blade starts chopping through the air again. I have survived, barely. I am surely not going after that guy again.

By Deno Astwood

Reflecting on my writing

My writing is about WW2. I have done a series of them. The mission one to the Mission six. They are four pages long to six or seven. I think the Rubric is four on organization. I need to use more Sub titles.

Clown mask

Step one: Buy a simple mask from the dollar store.

Step two: Do your design with a pencil and paint it your design.

Step three: You can put water on the paint to help it drip the paint down the mask a bit to look creepy but could choose not to.

Step four: Now you can get some foam ball from the dollars store and glue it to the nose. 

Step five: press the foam ball firmly on the top of the nose and then take the foam ball off and use PVA to glue the tip of the nose and the indent in the foam ball.

Step six: Once the PVA glue is dry, paint the nose red. 

You have got your awesome clown mask! 

Story I wrote...

I spot the wave behind me as I paddle. I paddle fast as the wave picks me up 20 metres. WOW! This wave is a tsunami! Right now I am Body boarding the biggest wave in History. There a swells in the wave. It's as quick as a tiger and big as a Hippo. My boards jumping down the wave as i hit a very steep spot and hit 100 miles per hour. My hands grab tight to the board has i am getting chucked forward. The wave is cresting above me. I hit the bottom of the wave. Its silent. All I can hear is my Adrenaline in the form of my heart beat. It breaks and the water lands beside me. I am stuck in this wave. The sun at the end of me is all that is giving me hope. I go up the wave and jump as high as I can with the speed I got from the big wave. I jump high into the sky looking down at the wave that i am thankful to be out of. I take grip of the board again as I land in the white was that takes me to a massive speed of 200 miles per hour. I get up and kneel on my board and wave to the hot chicks watching me. I do a Usain Bolt pose. I do a 360 as I over rotated and gunning it backwards on my board. “YEW!” I yell. I see two rocks coming up in the distance. I turn and go straight between them. I feel I am getting to swallow water as I travel to the shore, leap off my board and pose for the ladies. “Oh doggy!’ The girls yell. “Nice Body Boarding’, says dad. We go home and I stay proud of the wave I rode… By Deno

Best rugby players of New Zealand 2017

Hope you Enjoy my presentation. It would be great if you could comment who's your fav rugby player and how you found my writing.

Trick shot video with my main man Kaisei Ishihara

Hope you enjoy the video. I think we could have put more humor or sound and music in but we did good for school kids. I think we did the bass drop well and the bloopers.

Maths goal

I did my 4 times tables up to 4 times 10 in 33 seconds! I am moving on to a new goal now 👍 

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ILLEGAL ALCOHOL CRIME INVESTIGATION

WHEN I LEAVE FRANKLY SCHOOL

THIS IS THE CLIP WHAT I WANT TO BE REMEMBER AS WHEN I LEAVE FRANKLY SCHOOL. MANAGED TO GET IT ON, THANKS TO MY TEACHERS....

Assembly

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Sorry I can't put the video we shared in assembly, hope you enjoy this bit of writing about the assembly. 

It's an original day at frankley school. We have an assembly about us as year six's getting a stand tall year six leader badge. We share our videos what us as year six's want to be remembered as. We shake me the teaches hand and get to stand on stage with our year six badges. We hop off the stage and have a bit of a talk about having a year six badge and leave. And that was the assembly, hope you enjoyed.

I dip my toes into the cold. I leap in with fear. The water is as cold as the North Pole. Why do teachers make a swim… haha. I can see ice cubes at the bottom of the water at the school swimming people.

Show not tell is when you show in your writing whatever you're talking about, not tell. I will give you another example like up at the top.

I was cold

I had goosebumps 

Cold

THE HIMALAYAS 

It's like a bulldog is biting my fingers and won't let go. The wind sounds like an airbus A320. The Coldness is ripping apart my coat having a feast.

My boots are frozen making my feet num. My frosty gloves lay in my pockets waiting for a bit of warmth. My pants feel like leather because of the freezing thick moisture in the snow. My body has just reached a Certain point…. My head floods with hypothermia rushing into my death….. 

2012 aviation disaster

On 17 January 2008, British Airways Flight 38 turned for the worst when the airline just started going in a dive. One pilot was sleeping until…. What was that. Wow. This is the captain, fasten your seatbelt we're having a bit of trouble in the cockpit. Were going in a dive landing gear down flaps down throttle off we need everything to slow down the plane from diving. The captain instructs to the first officer. Alright it's not slowing down. See that yellow lever. Says the captain to the first officer. Yeah. Grab it. Ok says the first officer. Ahhh…. I can't reach it. Then Don't unbuckle to get it just Calm down I can smell nervousness on your breath. the captain says. Catherine. The captain says. Catherine is the air host, The mother of the captain. All right Catherine, see that yellow level. Yes. I want you to pull that yellow lever up and turn it clockwise and push it back down when I say ok. Yes. Catherine says nervously. Alright, three, two, one, NOW!!! Good but we're still in a dive. The first officer says. Calm down. The captain says. Alright slowing downs not working. Put the flaps up and the landing gear up and full throttle. Why we will have not enough time to think. The first officer says. The captain speaks, I've already got my thoughts together just do it. No. The first officer says. My aircraft. The captain says. The first officer has choice but to follow his instructions. Just tell me why. The first officer shouts. Because we're going to roll it and fly inverted. The first officer follows the captain's instructions. Maday maday, We're below 1000 feet going 319 knots flying inverted is there any nearby airport. Says the captain to the control tower. Yes, three miles away is an London airport. Not possible, if we find a field or a road we're landing on it. Alright be careful, says the control tower. The first officer screams, the right engine is on fire. Alright blow it up. Alright says the first officer. Oh no the left engine. Blow it out says the captain to the first officer. CATHERINE!!! The captain shouts. What says Air Horst Catherine. Get every one in the brass Persian. We're gliding by the way captain, says the first officer. Now Catherine, says captain. Catherine does and runs back to the cockpit before she gets in the brass Persian and say. Mother loves you, you're a good kid. Thanks mum, says the captain. Alright brass. The first officer says. 15 feet of landing on the lawn so in brass for impact. says the captain. They land. 47 on the plane got badly injured and the rest died. All up there was 152 souls on board British Airways Flight 38 including the Pilots and the air hoists. The people that survived remain haunted because of what happened……

BY DENO ASTWOOD

Donald's dinner

IF I WAS TO INVITE ONE PERSON TO COME OVER TO DINNER IT WOULD BE…

Well I wouldn't invite my brother Barnie because he would just put a mince and cheese pie into the microwave and squirt sauce all over his pie and take a big bite and then….

Bugger it's hot! 

Then sauce and mince is all over the front of his shirt and he is like…. Man, and licks sauce and mince off is short and fingers.

So I would invite……

Well I wouldn't invite my older brother patch because he puts tomato sauce on his ice cream so that puddin would be gross. My mum tells him a little bit of sauce. Only a thin layer of the size of your fist. He puts a thick layer of two fists. He puts sauce on spaghetti and everything. 

So I would invite….

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