Wednesday 26 March 2014

My BMX Crash Writing

In this piece of writing I used onomatopoeia words. I used them to describe the sounds when I fell off my bike. They add more detail.
I am going to keep on working on editing my work myself and handing it in for conference.
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  1. Leith & Jo10 April 2014 at 19:40

    Great story Deno. You used a lot of description in your story. Keep it up Deno. From Leith & Jo.

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