Working on Writing Goal

My goal is hard.  I don't now why.  I writed about bigfoot.

Daily five ... Write by myself

Today I am working on write by myself.  I am writing about PBD (Patch, Barnie and Deno) plane.  I love writing on the computer because it's easier.

Sharing my story

This is me shearing my story.  It was called the night of the living dummy.  It was a great story.  It had lots of wow words. I took up 3 bits of paper.  Lots of people liked it.  It took long time.

My new writing goal

I work on my goal hard.  I like my new goal.  My goal is show my thoughts and feelings.

Achieving my writing goal

I have been working hard on my writing goal last term. I am listening for my blends and I finally achieved my goal. I feel proud of myself. I also used a hook at the start and onomatopoeias so people know what sounds I am making.

My BMX Crash Writing

In this piece of writing I used onomatopoeia words. I used them to describe the sounds when I fell off my bike. They add more detail.

I am going to keep on working on editing my work myself and handing it in for conference.

My Writing Goal